April 3, 2010

The Prophecy

The Prophecy by Gill James
Associate Links: Amazon (or buy from the author's website)
  • Why I picked it up: Review request by publisher, interesting premise
  • Disclosure: Received book from publisher, but no other reimbursement from author or publisher
Kaleem Malkendy is different – and, on Terrestra, different is no way to be.
Everything about Kaleem marks him out from the rest: the blond hair and dark skin, the humble cave where he lives and the fact that he doesn’t know his father. He’s used to unwelcome attention, but even so, he’d feel better if some strange old man didn’t keep following him around.
Then the man introduces himself and begins to explain the Babel Prophecy – and everything in Kaleem’s life changes forever.
This book fascinated me.  The writing style was more middle grade than YA, though it certainly had its moments of PG-13 content (especially in Kaleem's mother's flashbacks); it went on a little bit too long, the dialogue and character development were mostly poor, and it could have done with some grammatical tightening.  BUT.  The premise managed to carry me through, feeling fresh and interesting despite what felt like some borrowing from sci-fi kid prodigy classics like Ender's Game.  Terrestra proved to be an intriguing setting, and I could relate to the intercultural themes.  The story raised more questions than it answered, in a mostly positive manner; setting up what I'm sure will be an interesting YA science fiction trilogy.

My main issue with it was its length.  I think this would make a better series if Gill James toned down the more mature themes, and made it a MG series spanning ten or more books.  Even now that I'm 15 I would read them - the story would have felt shorter, obviously; sweeter, more original, and more real.  The dialogue would have felt less fake and the characters less shallow if the characters involved had been younger.

As it was, though, this novel still managed to be peppered with moments of poignant bittersweetness - the odd romance between Kaleem's parents somehow worked, and so did, later in the book, Kaleem's own romantic adventures.  I wish more of this had been shown instead of told - Kaleem's internal voice bugged me.  Even so, at least some of the emotions worked.

The novel's real strength, however, was Gill James's interesting take on the future.  I can't place my finger on what felt new, but I enjoyed it, and I wish we could have spent more time exploring instead of developing emotionally.  The book got better as it went on, and I'd certainly pick up book two in the series.

All in all, it probably won't be enjoyed by those not fans of the genre, but science fiction fans, especially boys, should lap it up.  It's unusual enough to warrant picking up, certainly!

The Final Verdict: It won't make converts out of those who don't like science fiction, but it's an interesting futuristic tale that warrants a good look!  Three and a half out of five stars.

    April 2, 2010

    Winners of my 25 follower giveaway

    First of all, a HUGE thank you to those of you who participated. I wish I could have given the paperback of your choice to all of you! If I ever discover the money tree, perhaps I'll make good on that wish. But for now, the winner of the paperback of choice is...

    Celeste!

    I'm sending you an email as soon as I finish writing this post - be sure to get back to me and specify your first and second paperback choices!

    The second place winner, with first choice of either There Are No Words by Mary Calhoun Brown (read my review here) or The Ghost, The Eggheads, and Babe Ruth's Piano by Larry Sweitzer (read my review here), is...


    McKenzie!
      
    Again, you'll get an email as soon as I wrap this up - let me know which one you'd like!

     The third place winner, receiving either There Are No Words or The Ghost, The Eggheads, and Babe Ruth's Piano, is...

    Stephanie!
     
    I'll be dropping you a line to confirm your address!

    Again, thank you all, and I wish you happy reading! =)

    April 1, 2010

    Insights into the crossed wires of my crazy mind...

    Seeing as I still don't have a review scheduled - I'm simultaneously trying to read Beloved by Toni Morrison, The Language Instinct by Stephen Pinker, and The Prophecy by Gill James, all of which are heavy going - I figured I'd do something a little...different.  Maybe this will become a feature to fill the long, empty days between reviews.  I don't know.   Stay tuned.  =p

    In 7th grade, my favorite book was A Mango-Shaped Space by Wendy Mass, a novel about a girl with synesthesia, a pretty much harmless "disorder" where your senses literally combine - e.g., every time you taste chocolate, you might see sky blue circles a few feet in front of your face, or hear glass breaking, or feel like someone was placing something in your hand.  Stuff like that.  This fascinated me, so I did a lot of my own research into synesthesia - imagine how freaked out and thrilled I was to find out one of my friends actually has it -  and the idea partially inspired my science fiction novel-in-progress, about a girl with an extra sense.  I don't know exactly how realistic Wendy Mass's portrayal of synesthesia was in Mango, but it remains one of my favorite books.  I love her writing style!

    The idea of synesthesia intrigues me in a special way sometimes.  You know when you re-read a book, especially if it's a book that you haven't read in a long time, and when you reach one of the parts you remember as your favorite, you are suddenly transported back to the moment you first read it?  I read the part of Under the Jolly Roger where Jacky Faber finally takes control of the H.M.S. Wolverine on my grandparents' dock on the lake in July a couple years back, and now, every time I re-read that book I start thinking of summer and swimming and sunburn and ice cream and popsicles and sprinklers and flowers and loon calls and...

    Okay.  Does this happen to anyone but me?  Or is this a crude form of "synesthesia" we all share?  These flashbacks are pretty intense for me.  Sometimes I can even smell or taste what I associate with a book, especially if it's food.  I once walked around the house for a whole day with the smell of tuna fish sandwiches in my nostrils after I found one of the A-Z Mysteries I loved as a little kid, which I usually read while eating a tuna-fish sandwich.  (My mom calls me a food-oriented child.)

    So now I want to know - do you have any crossed wires of your own?  Please share in the comments!

    March 31, 2010

    An overdue awards post!

    So.  Some of my wonderful, wonderful followers decided to pass on awards, and I pretty much didn't reciprocate and pass them onto other people.  *hangs head in shame*  This was sort of in my egocentric phase, before I started looking at OTHER people's blogs, so I didn't have anyone to pass them on to.  But now that I've decided to actually ENGAGE in the community, I can now pass them on! ^_^

    Written Word Review passed on the Beautiful Blogger Award AND the Bliss (Happy 101) - thank you so much, Caitlin!

    Here are the rules:

    Thank & link to the person that gave you the award.

    Pass this award onto 15 bloggers you’ve recently discovered and think are fantastic

    Contact the blogs and let them know they’ve won.

    State 7 things about yourself.

    SEVEN THINGS ABOUT ME:

    1.  I'm very, very talkative.  If you get tired of hearing me talk, let me know. =)

    3.  I think Indian food, especially palak paneer, lamb boti, naan bread, and mango lassi, is THE BEST.

    3.  I am food aggressive.  So don't get between me and my dinner, or there will be casualties.  Especially if it's Indian.

    4.  I've been homeschooled since the first grade.  (I'd love to see more realistic YA novels about homeschoolers, BTW.)

    5.  If my dream to be a full-time writer doesn't pan out, or maybe even if it does, I want to be an ethnobotanist.  That's someone who studies how the indigenous peoples of the world use/used plants.  I'd like to work in Central/South America, so that's why I spend a lot of time brushing up on my Spanish, and also running around barefoot in the woods taking pictures of plants.

    6.  I like indie stuff.  Especially music and movies.  I dress so indie/bohemian you probably wouldn't be seen with me in public.  I'll post a picture sometime so you can all have a giggle.

    7.  I'm a geek and don't see a problem with it.  I read books and watch movies and memorize them word for word, then get mildly upset when people don't know what I'm talking about half the time.  Life is good.  =)

    I'm supposed to pass this one on to only 10 bloggers, but seeing as I already have to pick 15, I'm just going to pass all of these on to everybody.  I also received this award from Emidy over at Une Parole - thank you!

    TEN THINGS THAT MAKE ME HAPPY:

    1.  All of you amazing, amazing people that follow me on Twitter/follow me on my blog/or, even better, leave comments on my blog.  You make my day on a regular basis.

    2.  Doing stuff barefoot.  Outside.  In the mud.

    3.  Meeting my writing goals, and sometimes even not meeting them, as long as I get some writing done.

    4.  Reading and re-reading good books and even some bad ones.

    5. Biking.

    6.  My family.  You guys rock.  =D

    7.  Doing homework.  (Yes, I'm weird.)

    8.  Watching deep, heavy movies that have something to say about the human condition.

    9.  Watching Zombieland, Shaun of the Dead, Star Trek, Star Wars, Freaks and Geeks, The Young Ones, and any other number of movies or TV shows that are just plain funny.

    10.  Everything else that makes me happy that I've neglected to mention.

    Thank you, thank you, thank you both!  =)  I'm sorry if I'm giving you guys awards you already have, but I'll go ahead and pass these on to:

    Ari @ Reading in Color

    Patti @ Yay! Reads

    Nita @ The Back of the Bookshelf

    Taylor @ The Library Lurker

    Candace @ Candace's Book Blog

    Kris @ Voracious YAppetite

    Betsy @ K. Elizabeth Cornwell

    Leilani @ Can You Say Bookaholic?

    Kelsey @ The Door to Wonderland

    Kirsten @ A Romantic Enters the World

    TeenageReader @ Teenage Reader

    Stephanie @ Bookworm1858

    Emma @ Booking Through 365

    Amalia @ Good To Begin Well, Better to End Well

    Dwayne & Hanna @ Girls Without a Bookshelf

    Thanks again, and please pass it on!  Sorry this post was so late! =)

    Waiting on Wednesdays #3

    Blurgh.  Don't think I quite got the hang of this meme the first two times around.  So I'm going to try again.  =)  Anyway, it's hosted by Jill at Breaking the Spine, so you should go check it out!

    My can't-wait-to-read, pre-release book for this week is...

    Clariel: The Lost Abhorsen by Garth Nix!  There isn't even a cover for this one yet, so I'm using Sabriel, the first book in Garth Nix's excellent Abhorsen trilogy.  I devoured these books, especially Sabriel, and am excited to think that there's going to be another book!  It sounds pretty prequel-y:

    "...the story of the young woman who eventually became Chlorr of the Mask. It takes place about 320 years before the events in Sabriel." 

    That's the only information you can get on Goodreads so far, and they don't even have a release date yet - though it looks like it's going to be sometime in 2010.  This isn't one of those go-to-the-midnight-release (if there is one), maybe not even a pre-order-so-I-can-read-it-right-away, but it's certainly one I'll be reserving my spot for at the library!

    What are you waiting for this Wednesday?  Leave a comment here, or write your own post and link to it at Jill's Waiting on Wednesday this week!  Happy reading!

    March 29, 2010

    Turnabout

    Turnabout by Margaret Peterson Haddix
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    • Why I picked it up: Recognized the author's name, cool premise
    • Disclosure: Borrowed from library (was not reimbursed in any way by other or publisher)
    In the year 2000 Melly and Anny Beth had reached the peak of old age and were ready to die. But when offered the chance to be young again by participating in a top-secret experiment called Project Turnabout, they agreed. Miraculously, the experiment worked -- Melly and Anny Beth were actually growing younger every year. But when they learned that the final treatment would be deadly, they ran for their lives.
    Now it is 2085. Melly and Anny Beth are teenagers. They have no idea what will happen when they hit age zero, but they do know they will soon be too young to take care of themselves. They need to find someone to help them before time runs out, once and for all....
    In three words: I hated it.  It is THIS CLOSE to being the worst traditionally published book I have ever read.  And I'm really disappointed, because first of all, I loved Just Ella, and second of all, I loathed Palace of Mirrors and really wanted to read something by Margaret Peterson Haddix that I could enjoy as much as or close to as much as Ella.  This book was WORSE THAN Palace of Mirrors.  Shoot me now!

    I'm not quite sure how to begin describing it.  The premise is good, but not good enough to carry me through the truly awful narrative.  The writing felt rushed, the characters poorly thought out, and the plotting a total cliche.  The dialogue, especially, was unnatural and contrived.  "We thought you were working on the Cure--" or dozens of other examples, are not natural dialogue.  She cuts it off AFTER the person has said what they were trying to say!  Sorry, but that is one of my biggest pet peeves, and after 223 pages of it, I was very fed up.

    Her imaginings of the future were occasionally brilliant but usually very predictable and shallow.  Yes, the whole point is that their culture is obsessed with appearances and *leaving a mark*, but it still didn't fit.  There was so much more that could have been done with this premise, had it been given more thought, but it really seems like a rush job.  That's fine - I understand that authors need to pay the bills.  I think maybe at the pace it was set at, this would have been a better middle grade read.  As a YA reader, I expect things a little slower and better developed.  (BTW--not slamming the quality of middle grade books.  Just a comment on the pacing, which is definitely different.)  But Haddix seemed intent on throwing in a fair number of gratuitous, completely pointless sexual references that did nothing to further the story, so I won't be recommending this to my little sister.

    All in all, just do yourself a favor and don't read it.  I could go on, but I think you get the picture.

    The Final Verdict: Good premise, terrible execution in almost every way.  It feels poorly thought out and just plain badly written, more like a first novel than one by an experienced author.  One out of five stars.

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